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@@ -28,20 +28,18 @@
 The objective of this tutorial session is to help you get comfortable using
 RRDtool to write your own monitoring applications.
 
 The objective of this tutorial session is to help you get comfortable using
 RRDtool to write your own monitoring applications.
 

-In order to do some of the exercises you will need information which
-you do not have yet. There are three main sources from where you can
-acquire this information.
+In order to do some of the exercises you will need information not found in this document.
+There are sever main sources from where you can
+acquire this information readily.

 
 \begin{itemize}
 
 \begin{itemize}

+\item Me (at least today).

 \item The \href{http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool}{rrdtool web site}.
 \item The \href{http://oss.oetiker.ch/rrdtool}{rrdtool web site}.

-\item Or read the rrdtool UNIX manual pages.
-\item Ask me!
+\item The rrdtool source on \url{github.com/oetiker/rrdtool-1.x}.

 \end{itemize}
 
 \end{itemize}
 

-As you can see, there are no solutions printed on this sheet. I would
-propose though, that you your solutions to me. I will then put them together
-mail them back to everyone who sent in their work.
-
+Playing with RRDtool works best when you have some sample data to play with.
+You can find some on \url{github.com/oetiker/rrdtool-1.x/t/data}.

 
 \newpage
 \section{Creating an RRD}
 
 \newpage
 \section{Creating an RRD}


@@ -196,7 +194,7 @@ Lets assume the data in the RRD represents traffic seen on two
 different web servers which share the load of a busy web site.
 
 \begin{work}
 different web servers which share the load of a busy web site.
 
 \begin{work}

-  Use the \cmd{AREA:} and \cmd{:STACK} function to place the data from
+  Use the \cmd{AREA:} function and \cmd{:STACK} option to place the data from

   the first and second data-source on top of each other. This will
   show the traffic produced by each server on its own as well as the
   total traffic occurring on your web site.
   the first and second data-source on top of each other. This will
   show the traffic produced by each server on its own as well as the
   total traffic occurring on your web site.


@@ -222,6 +220,9 @@ before graphing it.
 
 \begin{work}
 Add two horizontal lines to the chart. One at the maximum value and the other at the $95\%$. Use the \cmd{VDEF} function for this.
 
 \begin{work}
 Add two horizontal lines to the chart. One at the maximum value and the other at the $95\%$. Use the \cmd{VDEF} function for this.

+\end{work}
+
+

 \ex{Smoothing}
 
 Over the years, the number of functions supported by rrdtools RPN engine has
 \ex{Smoothing}
 
 Over the years, the number of functions supported by rrdtools RPN engine has


@@ -249,12 +250,12 @@ Instruct DEF to re-sample your input data at a lower resolution than the origina
 
 \newpage
 \section{Advanced Exercises}
 
 \newpage
 \section{Advanced Exercises}

-\ex{Compile Master}
+\ex{Compiling RRDtool Master}

 
 

-The RRDtool source code is hosted on github. \url{https://github.com/oetiker/rrdtool-1.x}. 
+RRDtool is developed in the open. When hunting down bugs or to test the latest features, it is helpful to be able to compile a copy yourself.

 
 \begin{work}
 
 \begin{work}

-Clone the github repo, checkout the master branch run autogen and compile your own copy of the latest rrdtool version.
+Clone the rrdtool github repo, checkout the master branch run autogen and compile your own copy of the latest rrdtool version.

 \end{work}
 
 \ex{Alter RRD Parameters}
 \end{work}
 
 \ex{Alter RRD Parameters}