X-Git-Url: https://git.tokkee.org/?p=pkg-nagvis.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=debian%2Fcontrol;fp=debian%2Fcontrol;h=27b56a3d596ebcc3e60309f5b9326190d4fc1ec0;hp=e4dd073a476c0dc93013fbfb72e591dedc3ee251;hb=86392c1a56ec9470eecaa7b563ecf39c1e23323c;hpb=54ca041e44ed841d70a721b1cdf6da7bf9d70f7b

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index e4dd073..27b56a3 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -13,36 +13,29 @@ Package: nagvis
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, php5-common (>= 5.3.0), libapache2-mod-php5, php5-gd, ucf, graphviz, php5-sqlite, php-net-socket, php-gettext, check-mk-livestatus
 Suggests: nagvis-demos
-Description: Visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like  a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance
+ to display network traffic or IT services such as email.
  .
- Key features are:
- .
-  * Display of single Hosts or Services
-  * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
-    ("recognize services")
-  * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
-  * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
-    Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
-  * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ Its key features are:
+  * Display of single hosts or services;
+  * Representation of a host dependent on the state of its services;
+  * Visualization of complete host- or servicegroups with one icon;
+  * Organization of hosts/services/groups into Sub-Map icons;
+  * Graphical representation of complete IT systems.
 
 Package: nagvis-demos
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, nagvis (= ${source:Version})
-Description: Demo Mapgs for NagVis
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like  a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga - demo maps
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance
+ to display network traffic or IT services such as email.
  .
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
+  * Display of single hosts or services;
+  * Representation of a host dependent on the state of its services;
+  * Visualization of complete host- or servicegroups with one icon;
+  * Organization of hosts/services/groups into Sub-Map icons;
+  * Graphical representation of complete IT systems.
  .
-  * Display of single Hosts or Services
-  * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
-    ("recognize services")
-  * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
-  * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
-    Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
-  * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
-  .
-  This package contains some demonstration maps.
-
+ This package provides some demonstration maps.