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| author | Andy Parkins <andyparkins@gmail.com> | |
| Tue, 12 Jun 2007 15:43:19 +0000 (16:43 +0100) | ||
| committer | J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu> | |
| Sun, 8 Jul 2007 22:01:28 +0000 (18:01 -0400) | ||
| commit | 5478285961996560147e2fd39daf45b79f580641 | |
| tree | fb1b226dc85cf76976e7fff38b67581cf159c87f | tree | snapshot |
| parent | 5fda48d67c82e07950e0b0c21cd8c97daefd7be0 | commit | diff |
user-manual: grammar and style fixes
- "method of" is vulgar, "method for" is nicer
- "recovery" becomes "recovering" from Steve Hoelzer's original version
of this patch
- "if you want" is nicer as "if you wish"
- "you may" should be "you can"; "you may" is "you have permission to"
rather than "you can"'s "it is possible to"
Signed-off-by: Andy Parkins <andyparkins@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
- "method of" is vulgar, "method for" is nicer
- "recovery" becomes "recovering" from Steve Hoelzer's original version
of this patch
- "if you want" is nicer as "if you wish"
- "you may" should be "you can"; "you may" is "you have permission to"
rather than "you can"'s "it is possible to"
Signed-off-by: Andy Parkins <andyparkins@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
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