X-Git-Url: https://git.tokkee.org/?a=blobdiff_plain;f=Documentation%2Fgitcore-tutorial.txt;h=7ba5e589d7e824c526482c9707a5c26ac730cc9e;hb=de8139005f04a4a5ad8a54c771475803594028cd;hp=e4dd5518c81ac98ef3da9cbb1cea4a9e1fe6e62c;hpb=8561b522d756861a41c0c54dfa2f609c7063887a;p=git.git

diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
index e4dd5518c..7ba5e589d 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
@@ -1243,10 +1243,10 @@ $ git ls-files --stage
 ------------
 
 In our example of only two files, we did not have unchanged
-files so only 'example' resulted in collapsing, but in real-life
-large projects, only small number of files change in one commit,
-and this 'collapsing' tends to trivially merge most of the paths
-fairly quickly, leaving only a handful the real changes in non-zero
+files so only 'example' resulted in collapsing.  But in real-life
+large projects, when only a small number of files change in one commit,
+this 'collapsing' tends to trivially merge most of the paths
+fairly quickly, leaving only a handful of real changes in non-zero
 stages.
 
 To look at only non-zero stages, use `\--unmerged` flag: